This is my 153rd Chinese Xieyi painting that I painted in my art lesson Thursday night.
My teacher thought that
I created painting last week -- A Song of Autumn is too mass and the layers of the view is not clear as well, whole of the pictures was full too many things and they were not be connected well. The flowers are too small. The construction of the picture is bad. Whole of the picture lacks a big verve...
That is why, I was just given only 55 marks and I was trained to paint with big brushes with color directly in my lesson.
I do agree with my teacher and I am creating another new painting now, I will let you see it on Sunday...
How do you think of this Chinese Xieyi picture? Do you like it?
If you have any questions, comments or suggestions, please write to
shirley@ebridge.cn, You are welcome to publish your opinions in
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--Shirley ZhangWritten and Edited on Friday, September 14,2007
