This is my 275th
Chinese Xieyi Painting and
my 498th painting since 2003. Also, it is the 24th (43rd) painting (practice) that I have created in 2010.
My Chinese art teacher just gave the
blue peony painting 80 scores last week, for its structure is not good. So, I re-created the new one Tuesday night and Wednesday morning, before I went to my office.
Then in my art lesson Wednesday night, my teacher gave me 89 score, he did not think the structure in the middle part is good yet.
Since my teacher has required every new painting of mine in 2010 must reach the level of 90 score; since I have realized the problem that when I was painting, the colors were very bright, but, when they have been dry, the colors changed lighter. Therefore, I will certainly re-created it once more when I have time. :-)
How do you think of this new painting?
Do you think that I have made some progress? What is your comments about the two paintings? Which one do you like?
If you have any questions, comments or suggestions, welcome to write to shirley@ebridge.cn or shirleyz004@yahoo.com ,you can also publish your opinions on Message Board . :-)
--Shirley ZhangSun, March 28, 2010
